Essay comments feedback

This academic writing feedback comment bank will help you quickly provide feedback on academic writing. The comment bank can be imported into eMarking Assistant which provides a convenient way of inserting these comments when providing feedback on academic writing. There is one row for each comment with the following columns:

Your three points of criticism build very well on each other, and you end with a satisfying resolution. As noted throughout, the biggest weakness of the paper is the occasional lack of clarity. I suspect that a lot of this has to do with the difficulties of writing in a second language.

I offer three sets of comments to consider, as marked by the three different brackets: >, [ [tone, structure, organization]], and { {grammar}}. I may have also removed (some words -'dead wood' or 'distracting') and added SOME WORDS, as designated by parentheses (), or ALL CAPS .

Some professors have strict word-count requirements that you must take into account when writing your paper. If you aren’t sure if your essay length is acceptable, ask your professor before turning it in. If you’re faced with essay feedback that says you need to shorten your essay, try to focus your argument a bit further.